Horror Story CP

1. I'm very hungry because I have not been eating for 3 days now. My parents are not paying. Then, I called my girlfriend to meet at a house. And I've brought kitchen utensils like knives, stoves, fryers, etc.
"Hi baby, I need your help! Will you help me?"
"Want is dear, where are we meeting?"
"In a house on the street ...."
" OK "
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Then I came home with a ripe bundle of meat.
"Wahh, corned, Thank you boy you have brought corned beef for Mother and Father"
"Yeah, same - same bu, sir"
Mmm, it's delicious corned beef. I became addicted. Oh yes, I promise to meet in an empty house. Why I slaughtered him for corned beef. OMG, dammit me .. but let it be, that important not caught my parents, haha.

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